To battle the fierce fears,
Which attack our sole soul,
We should sometimes be allowed to cry aloud,
And apply a balm on our sore heart to help us soar high,
We need to shear the ego & the ‘I’, and see life through the sheer “eye“,
And let go of some of our limiting attributes and sum up our life.
The underlying requirement of human life, is a Piece of Peace,
To tide over, our tied shackles of problems and limitations.
We tend to assess if life is fair, but the truth that matters is, in this journey how did we fare?
I have used homophones in each line of this piece and tried to bring out the gist of life. Hope you all enjoy it.
Amazingly creative way to put across a beautiful message Deepika. Well done 👍
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Thanks a lot Radhika 😇
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Absolutely enjoyed this Deepika 🙂 You used the homophones so well and meaningfully!
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Glad you liked it. Thanks pragalbha 🙏
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Oh yes, I did! I will be showing this piece to the children at the story club who would be the best audience to appreciate the use of homophones.
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Thanks a million Pranitha, Much appreciated !!
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Lovely and creative the way you used the words
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Many thanks !!
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Creative piece of art in its poetic form, Deepika very well composed poem
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Thank you dear kamal 😇
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Welcome Deepika
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