My Bestie… On May 9, 2018May 9, 2018 By DeepikasRamblingsIn Daily Prompt via Daily Prompt: Rapid You are calm, you are dutiful, You connect to the world within me, making me peaceful, You provide me life and stay a lifetime with me, You are my loyal friend, for till the end, you are with me. When I am angry, you work at a rapid pace, You are the only one who runs along with me in every race, You are the most precious asset, Taking care of you is the best bet, From the time in the womb to birth, to death, You are the life saving mechanism, I bow down to you for being there for me, my dear BREATH !! Share this:TwitterFacebookEmailWhatsAppLike Loading...
Love the line …when I am angry you work at rapid speed. LikeLiked by 1 person May 9, 2018 at 5:55 pm Reply
Till i read breath…i had assumed it to be the Heart!! Nice poem, enjoy life till it lasts…thank you breath!! LikeLiked by 1 person May 9, 2018 at 7:50 pm Reply
Probably, it could be interchanged. But breath is the often neglected one, taken for granted. Thanks karthik !! LikeLiked by 2 people May 10, 2018 at 7:00 am Reply
Same here, I too guessed it as heart. Guess both are bossom buddies, without whom we cannot do. Nice one Deepika 👍 LikeLiked by 1 person May 10, 2018 at 2:46 pm Reply
Yes they truly are and they do go hand in hand. But I often feel, breath is the more neglected one 🙄 LikeLiked by 1 person May 11, 2018 at 7:48 pm Reply
The essence of life itself, it that is not your friend, I cannot imagine what is. Good one, Deepika. LikeLiked by 1 person May 26, 2018 at 4:59 pm Reply
And breath exercise can do wonders. What a precious post and beautiful lines Deepika 👍 LikeLiked by 1 person June 7, 2018 at 5:23 am Reply
Love the line …when I am angry you work at rapid speed.
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Thank you sunil !!
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Till i read breath…i had assumed it to be the Heart!!
Nice poem, enjoy life till it lasts…thank you breath!!
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Probably, it could be interchanged. But breath is the often neglected one, taken for granted.
Thanks karthik !!
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You are welcome 🙂
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Beautiful poem
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Thanks tanvir !!
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Lovely! 🙂
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Thank you !!
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Same here, I too guessed it as heart. Guess both are bossom buddies, without whom we cannot do. Nice one Deepika 👍
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Wow! Very well written Deepika!
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Thanks a ton, Divya 😇
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Yes they truly are and they do go hand in hand. But I often feel, breath is the more neglected one 🙄
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The essence of life itself, it that is not your friend, I cannot imagine what is. Good one, Deepika.
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And breath exercise can do wonders. What a precious post and beautiful lines Deepika 👍
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Yes indeed !!
Thank you meenakshi 💕
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Wow! Wonderful 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
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Thanks B ☺️
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Always!
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