RonovanWrites #Weekly #Haiku #Poetry Prompt #Challenge #156 Ocean&Shore On July 4, 2017 By DeepikasRamblingsIn Haiku Holding hand in hand In sands of time and beyond, Swim the ocean of life. 2. Waters with a story, Coming miles to eternity, confides to the shore. I’ve written two Haikus for the challenge. Do let me know which one you liked better. AdvertisementShare this:TwitterFacebookEmailWhatsAppLike this:Like Loading...
Both beautiful, the energy of second one draws me in though 🙂 LikeLiked by 1 person July 5, 2017 at 3:25 am Reply
I am intrigued by “waters with a story”. Wonderful image in my mind. I’m most inclined toward no. 2! LikeLiked by 1 person July 5, 2017 at 9:45 am Reply
The philosophical me feel both the poems are connected. If given a choice i would connect both because it conveys the universal law the ” end of a beginning.or say the beginning of an end” Both have a message to convey, to make the theme as a whole……., a cycle. extremely well annotated.. . LikeLiked by 1 person July 5, 2017 at 2:01 pm Reply
Never thought of it that way. Thank you for the new dimension and insight. 🙏🙏 LikeLike July 5, 2017 at 5:32 pm Reply
I have come to understand that just a few words creatively put together can bring about so much meaning. Both of them are lovely, Deepika. LikeLiked by 1 person July 10, 2017 at 9:50 am Reply
Oh, that’s so nice of you to say so , pranitha. Thanks a ton ☺️ LikeLiked by 1 person July 10, 2017 at 7:06 pm Reply
Both haiku are beautiful. My favorite is the 2nd. 😀 LikeLiked by 1 person July 13, 2017 at 2:55 am Reply
DeepikasRamblings 
Both so meaningful. Loved them 💜
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Thanks Radhika 🙂
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First one. Oh so romatique!
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Thanks dear ☺️
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You’re welcome 😊
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Both beautiful, the energy of second one draws me in though 🙂
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Thanks a lot pragalbha ☺️
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You are very welcome.
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I am intrigued by “waters with a story”. Wonderful image in my mind. I’m most inclined toward no. 2!
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Ok. Lovely… Thanks a lot Lizl 🙂
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The philosophical me feel both the poems are connected.
If given a choice i would connect both because it conveys the universal law the ” end of a beginning.or say the beginning of an end”
Both have a message to convey, to make the theme as a whole……., a cycle.
extremely well annotated.. .
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Never thought of it that way. Thank you for the new dimension and insight. 🙏🙏
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I have come to understand that just a few words creatively put together can bring about so much meaning. Both of them are lovely, Deepika.
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Oh, that’s so nice of you to say so , pranitha. Thanks a ton ☺️
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My pleasure, Deepika
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Both haiku are beautiful. My favorite is the 2nd. 😀
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Thanks a lot Vashti. Glad you liked it ☺️
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