From the white blanket,
Arrives spring with vibrant hues,
Bright beauties swaying in breeze,
Mass of clouds watching.
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DeepikasRamblings
My experiences, my thoughts just the way I see it, & feel it!!!
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Thank you Ranjitha 😃
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Nice and bright poetry with a nice pic
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Beautiful imagery and I can see those clouds. Remember, for a poem to be considered a Tanka, it must have five lines, with 5/7/5/7/7 syllables in each line. I will have more options for you on Tuesday this week. I know if you write in your native language, it translates out differently in English. If that is the case, please let me know. ❤ Hugs.
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Oops..My bad Colleen. I just missed it, I confused it with a haiku and I did a somewhere in between 😐. Thank you so much for pointing out. Will keep it in mind for the next challenge. 👍
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No worries. Tomorrow we will have a new start on our poetry challenge. Stay tuned. ❤
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The spring; of imagination and beauty so well portrayed in this poem. Lovely, Deepika!
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Thank you dear pranitha.
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