Colleen’s Weekly #Tanka #Poetry Challenge # 24 – “FIRE & RAIN” On March 13, 2017 By DeepikasRamblingsIn Tanka Arid, pair of eyes, Burnt out, expressionless, yearning for respite, Rain of love descends. Pic courtesy : Pixabay.com Share this:TwitterFacebookEmailWhatsAppLike Loading...
I read the lines you wrote, Then looked deep at the eyes in the photo, The eyes speak what you say. LikeLiked by 1 person March 14, 2017 at 1:08 pm Reply
Thank you very much Daneel. Wishing you a very happy holi too. LikeLiked by 1 person March 14, 2017 at 1:51 pm Reply
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Oh, the power of love! Beautiful, Deepika!
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Thanks dear pranitha.
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Soo beautiful!
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Thank you pragalbha 😃
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Powerful words! Well done! ❤
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Thank you Colleen.
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Most welcome. ❤
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lovely and very deep..
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Thank you so much, Shilpa.
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😊😇
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I read the lines you wrote, Then looked deep at the eyes in the photo,
The eyes speak what you say.
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Once it rains love, the eyes will twinkle again 😃
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very nice and Happy holi Deepika
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Thank you very much Daneel.
Wishing you a very happy holi too.
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Welcome mam.
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Lovely, so full of emotion.
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This is nice! 🙂
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Thank you Prakash 😃
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Beautifully penned…☺🙂🤗
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Thank you so much. Thanks for the follow.
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Yr welcome..☺🙂
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😊😊
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