A hurt embedded,
deep within, erupts to tears,
flows to eternity.
A warm smile, like a soothing balm,
gives succour and strength to heal.
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Tanka – Help and Smile
A hurt embedded,
deep within, erupts to tears,
flows to eternity.
A warm smile, like a soothing balm,
gives succour and strength to heal.
https://wordpress.com/read/feeds/55624313/posts/1357148286
DeepikasRamblings 
To let the tears flow and smile again heals many scars. Lovely!!
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Thank you, Radhika 🙂
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Unison with Radhika Ma’am…intriguing tanka this is…
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Thank you so much sangbad. I’m honoured 😃
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a shied smiley
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Strong words and simply beautiful kids.
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Thank you so much 😃
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Well done, my friend. Your tanka tells a sweet story. I love it! ❤
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Thank you so much Colleen 😃
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So beautiful 🙂
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Thank you pragalbha 😃
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nice one Deepika
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Thanks Daneel 😃
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Welcome Deepika
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Great tanka for this prompt.
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Thank you so much 😃
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The contrast of the bleeding heart and the warm smiles are brought beautifully, Deepika!
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Thank you 😃
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solid counted
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Thank you very much saksham 😃
Have a great weekend.
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too u mam
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